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--- wip:corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-m4002_grouper_excavator_module [2018/08/12 03:09] – club24
+++ corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-m4002_grouper_excavator_module [2019/04/20 20:21] – redlinks removed wes
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 ====== Grouper Excavator Balaena Equipment ======
-Based on the fish that digs holes the Grouper Excavator is a small mounted drill and transport rig designed to be used by the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-3s_balaena_industrious_platform]]. It was designed and put into production by [[corp:galactic_horizon]] in [[calendar:ye_40]].
+Based on the fish that digs holes, the Grouper Excavator is a small mounted drill and transport rig designed to be used by the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-3s_balaena_industrious_platform]]. It was designed and put into production by [[corp:galactic_horizon]] in [[timeline:ye_40]].
 ===== About the Grouper Excavator ======
-Based on the habits of the particular fish it's named after, the Grouper is designed to be used when testing sites for the presence of minerals and resources. With several drilling and excavating methods available it makes an ideal vehicle mounted module and is primarily used by the mineral sector of the Mineral Plant.
+Based on the habits of the particular fish it's named after, the Grouper is designed to be used when testing sites for the presence of minerals and resources. With several drilling and excavating methods available, it makes an ideal vehicle mounted module and is primarily used by the mineral sector of the Mineral Plant.
-The grouper comes equipped with 1 high performance robotic arm and a large storage bin to extract, store and transport samples for site testing. Where the arm mounts to the tray there is several reinforcements however these cannot withstand lifting more than 3 tons at one time even with the arm retracted.
+The Grouper comes equipped with 1 high-performance robotic arm and a large storage bin to extract, store, and transport samples for site testing. Where the arm mounts to the tray there are several reinforcements, however, these cannot withstand lifting more than 3 tons at one time even with the arm retracted.
-**Attachments list:**
+**List of Attachments:**
   * 30m sample core excavator - 1 000KS
   * Small industrial mining laser - 1 000KS
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   * Jaw-action bucket - 750KS
   * Crane winch - 750KS
 ==== Appearance ====
-The Grouper is comprised of two main parts, the storage bin and the high performance arm.
+The Grouper is composed of two main parts: the storage bin and the high-performance arm.
-The storage bin is "U" shaped with a flat base that is mounted directly to the Balaena's tray and secured via the numerous attachment points. It's sides extend up by 3 meters and move outwards from the base making it wider at the top than the bottom allowing it to carry more material.
+The storage bin is "U" shaped with a flat base that is mounted directly to the Balaena's tray and secured via the numerous attachment points. Its sides extend up by 3 meters and move outwards from the base, making it wider at the top than at the bottom and allowing for it to carry more material.
+The arm is similar in design to the telescopic arms of the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-m4000_squid-rig_attachment|Squid-Rig]], however, it is much sturdier and thicker. It starts at a compressed length of 2m and can telescope out to 10m, however, this severely reduces the weight any mounted equipment can lift without damaging the mount.
-The arm is similar in design to the telescopic arms of the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k2-m4000_squid-rig_attachment|Squid-Rig]] however it is much studier and thicker. It starts at a compressed length of 2m and can telescope out to 10m however this severely reduces the weight any equipment mounted can lift without damaging the mount.
 ==== Statistics and Information ====
-Basic relevant information about the device including both general info and product specifications.
+Basic relevant information about the device, including general info and product specifications.
   * **Organization:** [[corp:galactic_horizon]]
   * **Nomenclature:** GH-K2-M4002
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   * **Manufacturer:** [[corp:galactic_horizon]]
   * **Price:** 6 000[[faction:yamatai:ks]]
-The Grouper weighs under a ton when empty and does not impact the top speed of the Balaena, with its own on-board power supply for operation it also does not impact the charge length of the Balaena.
+The Grouper weighs under a ton when empty and does not impact the top speed of the Balaena; with its own onboard power supply for operation, it also does not impact the charge length of the Balaena.
 ^ Carrying Weight ^ Penalty ^
 | 1 - 5 tons | 30km/h |
 | 6 - 10 tons | 50km/h |
-| 10 - 15 tons((15 is the MAX carry weight and will rarely be pushed to this limit)) | 75km/h |
+| 10 - 15 tons((15 is the MAX carry weight and will rarely be pushed to this limit.)) | 75km/h |
-===== OOC Notes =====
-[[user:club24]] created this article on 2018/07/30 20:14.
-This product falls under the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh_product_agreement]]
+===== OOC Notes =====
+[[user:club24]] created this article on 2018/07/30 20:14;  [[https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/horizon-grouper-excavator-balaena-equipment.62829/#post-385356|approved]] it (using the [[guide:reviewing_submissions#checklists_for_reviewers|checklist]]) on 2018/08/16 06:01.
-🚧 This article is a work-in-progress. Is it not currently approved.
+This product falls under the [[corp:galactic_horizon:gh_product_agreement]].
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