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--- corp:bwe:clothing:ndc_officer_uniform [2021/04/19 14:47] – [Dress Coat] whisper
+++ corp:bwe:clothing:ndc_officer_uniform [2023/11/18 05:00] – ↷ Links adapted because of a move operation wes
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 === Boots  ===
-Tall [[items:clothing:boots:combat|combat boots]] with reinforced toes made of a burnished gold metal that matches the piping on the rest of the uniform. The Mithril automatically adjusts to a wearer's boots by becoming form-fitting, avoiding any complications that would come with wearing two sets of footwear.
+A pair of tall [[items:clothing:boots:combat|combat boots]] with reinforced toes made of a burnished gold metal that matches the piping on the rest of the uniform. The Mithril automatically adjusts to a wearer's boots by becoming form-fitting, avoiding any complications that would come with wearing two sets of footwear.
 While all boot options are tall, officers can choose if they wish for the boot to come to the top of their calves or all the way up to their thighs.
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 === Undershirt ===
-Normal cotton, button up dress shirt with right side breast pocket, which can come in white, black, or red.
+A normal cotton, button-up dress shirt, which can come in white, black, or red.
 === Vest ===
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 While the official uniform code requires that all pieces of the uniform be worn together, in practice Officers tend to wear various components as they see fit. For official occasions or when interacting outside of their 'work space', such as a ship, battlefield, etc, all members of the military are expected to be in full dress.
 ===== OOC Notes =====
-[[user:whisper]] created this article on 2021/04/19 13:59.
+[[members:whisper]] created this article on 2021/04/19 13:59.
 🚧 This article is a work-in-progress. Is it not currently approved.
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 products.product_manufacturer : Black Wing Enterprises
 products.product_brand :
-products.product_releaseyear : YE 43
+products.product_release_year :
+products.product_discontinued_year :
 products.product_usedby : New Dusk Conclave
 products.product_parent :
 products.product_image : :faction:ndc:officer.png
 products.product_price_ks :
+products.product_drv3_max :
 products.product_production : Mass Production
-products.product_description : Made exclusively for military officers in the [[faction:ndc:start]], the Officer Uniform is meant to be a functional statement piece that the Conclave's officers can be proud to be seen in.
+products.product_description : Made exclusively for military officers in the NDC, the Officer Uniform is meant to be a functional statement piece that the Conclave's officers can be proud to be seen in.
 products.product_length :
 products.product_width :
 products.product_height :
 products.product_mass :
-products.product_color :
 stararmy_logistics.saoy_supclass :
 stararmy_logistics.saoy_usage :
+stararmy_logistics.saoy_adopted_year :
+stararmy_logistics.saoy_reviewed_last :
+stararmy_logistics.saoy_item_retired_year :
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